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Well after attempting to come up with ten lines of poetry at one setting I found myself left with only five.

A tanka style ode to the first unabashed bisexual girl I ever knew. I'm not sure how I ended up with that particular topic, but the journey in this case matters less than the destination. At least that's what all of the scribbles on the yellow Post-it notes seem to imply.

The title of the Poem is Sappho, which should illuminate the meaning well enough if I didn't do a good enough job with my imagery.

Hopefully some folks will take a peak and give a fellow some feedback. It was after all an experiment, and all experiments need results.

Until later..

Bart

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Smile if you're stupid,
laugh if you understand.


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