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Melancholy baby, self involved lady,
tell me where is your id today?
Stuck between worlds, after all we're mere girls, go fuck yourself is what I say.
Is your soul snow white?, as you continue to fight off the draw of your old ways.
Pontificate this, some things you will miss, as you shed the skin of bygone days.
Birds on wires, infernal fires, where are we to go?
One life ends, as one begins, it's all you need to know.


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The following comments are for "Melancholy Baby"
by annabelle lee

Thinking Outloud in a Crowd
It's only lonely
among the self-involved crowd...
Now go think that to yourself...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 7, 2016 )





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