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Outside my house, the trees they see
Their knothole eyes regarding me
They too have mouths, it's true I swear!
So yes my dear you should take care
For late at night you know I've heard. The strangest sounds, yes my word
So on your way, little goblins and ghosts
And pay no mind to my attentive old hosts
For if you do dally and linger too long
You'll be taken right up, like a bird to a song
Bypass this house this All Hallows Eve,
For if you do stop, you just might not leave.

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The following comments are for "All Hallows Eve"
by annabelle lee

I love it. There's a minor glitch in flow as the regulation of syllables alters, but the rhythm's maintained quickly after that. With just enough spooky and just enough cute to make an excellent Halloweeny blend. ^_^

( Posted by: Jei [Member] On: October 25, 2003 )

gotta give you a wootwoot....i luved deliciously EEEEEVVVVVIIIILLLLL....yes very good...the rythm was off for a sec but the following line fixed it so no worries...*_*

( Posted by: snuffystuff [Member] On: December 1, 2003 )

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