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stumbling barefoot on
the dark and stony path
your blinkers are upon my head
A whisper of glory
withers within me
bent to obedience
maddened to rage until the last
grinding bitter gasp
I am slain by that you mistook
for your own kindness

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The following comments are for "A Cry In Darkness"
by Ae

thats awesome
thats flippin awesome, i like to write poetry but that is awesomme, its the best one ive read since i joined this site its awesome.

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: October 25, 2003 )

Short, but good.
That was short, but that doesn't matter. You strung the poem together rather nicely, and I liked the choice of words. Well done.

( Posted by: Cryptic Rapture [Member] On: October 26, 2003 )

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