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Author's note: I'm not really sure if I can call this a haiku since it doesn't quite follow the format, but I'm unsure if it can be classified as Poetry. I'll leave it in the Haiku category for now.


a spider floating in the breeze
spinning silk patterns of dewed secrets
you create beauty

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The following comments are for "Artistry"
by Ae

just so
This is a beautiful haiku, but you need to slash it.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: October 24, 2003 )

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