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Bipolar Blues
By harsh day I am transparent, come see inside my soul.
At night its heir apparent, my mind is next to go.
Flesh and bone dissolving, right before my eyes.
As no one can step forward, and save me from the lies.
Their acid tongue raze my flesh, revealing just the nerve.
Its ravenous kiss across myself with a certain verve.
I know not yet what to do with my wretched life.
As for now, I shall remain, mother, lover, wife.


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by annabelle lee

this poem!
I know the feeling only as another bi-polar does. I love it.

( Posted by: edens_wench [Member] On: October 23, 2003 )

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I don't happen to be bipolar, but I wrote this prior to discovering my misdiagnosis, but angst is angst.

( Posted by: annabelle lee [Member] On: October 26, 2003 )

very great story..
behind the whole reason why you wrote it, because there is a whole lot of world that you try to rely on and then realize, it doesn't come out to be true.

( Posted by: ryangilr0y [Member] On: April 10, 2005 )





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