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Not yet a person as defined by the state. I am forced to work in a room where the concept of windows are long since forgot. What are the fruits of my labor but letters A through F. Letters with the power to unlock doors in the future. May I remind all that it is we whom make these doors that lock away a future that does not exist. No matter your efforts at planning my future, I have now found the problem with you. When did you swallow the dirt they tried to feed us so long ago. Now you sit in front of me and argue that the dirt is the base for the growth of the seed. I plainly see the plants that have grown from the dirt you hold in such high esteem. They are witherd and weak. The same old seeds are being planted in the shadow of the fact that they once worked so well. The answer to the problem is evident time and time again, the mark on progress lies in the seed. I refuse to swallow this dirt untill I have found another seed, when this is so, we shall find these doors of ours no longer need to exist.

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Con-quest-a-dor



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The following comments are for "Rantismo"
by cordle

Excellent
A lot better than what i could do- I'll leave it at that.

( Posted by: sk8trgrlac [Member] On: December 13, 2003 )





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