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When is now that weve all gone insane. Turned on the T.V. to be told today i will be cold. No matter they say, cause your never to old to buy that place in the sky, but to you I ask will will you cry as you realize this big lie. Drink now flush later in the place you set free your aligator. Lifes a reason for...? Beware, this question as it knocks at your door. You and I may not see eye to eye here and now but from our vantage point on the moon well all agree lifes no more than a trip to where your going. Now that you understand your running to where you intend to run from we can all just laugh as others go and hide. This hide and go seek with your grave can be a fun game indeed espesialy if you see your face as a gift to be recived. Matter is the latter item on your grochery list. Run your cart down the isle like a castaway whom for coconuts has become an extreme displeasure to the gut. Still here in the place where your judged by your face? Yet another place, no worries we all finish this race.

Apoligize I do for spelling, not perfect, if it be so.


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The following comments are for "Little tricks that make our world go tick."
by cordle

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had to read it out loud to make sense of it but good poem...I was going to say mispelling but since you knew you couldn't that was ok....might try a dictionary helps me a lot..and I thought I could spell but found out I am a poor speller....anyway..good thoughts

( Posted by: larryta4 [Member] On: November 4, 2003 )

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