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Oh sure you needed that sweet embrace
But you never gave it in return.
You walked the distance all alone…
I watched you walk away tonight.

Frustrating that sought out affection
You stole that time I needed mine
Your vain attempts to mask those lies…
I watched you walk away.

Remembrance had me contemplate-
That fortified wall I had put up
Your pursuit was not mine…
And here I watched you walk away.

Time flows on and hearts beat still
But locked away in secret thoughts
Sorrow swells a bleeding tune…
And I let you walk away.



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