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The girl in Love
Much to Bear
But no regrets
Purest Love one can get

The Mom in labour
Cries of Pain
But respect her
Strength none can compare

The new born Child
But source of Hope
Gifts from innocent eyes

The tender Sweet hue
White like ice
But red with passion
Gentle touch of Romance
Honey flavoured Life

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The following comments are for "Pink"
by ^white

Very nice
I like it, especially the last stanza.

( Posted by: Storyteller [Member] On: November 9, 2003 )

Thx guys! I'll see what i cando with the 2nd stanza then. Hmm.. :) Any comments what else pink can make u think of? :P

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: November 9, 2003 )

Romancing the Passion
the pink in my life
is red with passion...
far beyond the romance...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 6, 2016 )

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