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I WOKE UP WITH A BIG WIDE YAWN. NOTICED THAT MY TEETH WERE GONE!THEY DIDN'T GO VERY FAR. THEY WERE SITTING BEDSIDE IN A JAR! LOOKED IN THE MIRROR, WRINKES GALORE. LOOKED DOWN FURTHER AND SAW SOME MORE!I GRABBED MY CANE, AND HEADED OUT.I USE THE CANE, BECAUSE OF GOUT! SOME MAY SAY OLD AGE IS FINE,BUT NOT FOR ME I'M 39!


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The following comments are for "OLD AGE"
by TB51

haha
This is really funny! While the caps lock and the lack of formatting kind of bothered me, the repeated chuckles made up for it. Good job. =D

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: October 18, 2003 )

Old Age
I could see you running out the door with the cane. Very funny and evocative. I like the cap locks and lack of formatting, kinda like don marquis in reverse.

( Posted by: tim55b [Member] On: October 18, 2003 )





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