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panting..panting..
out of breath
out of reach
out of voice
for even a tender cry

dominance, control
taking charge
taking over
taking away
simple things meant big

jealousy, possessive
infusing anger
infusing pain
infusing hatred
that steals our love away

draning..drainging..
I'm out of blood
Out of Reach
Out of Pain
And out of hopes
that used to fill my tender dreams


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