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Mouldy Suburbia. an informal tone for all to see.
shrouded in the magic of television and closed curtains.
Shopping Malls and changing stalls.
The Moment of mould that envelops me.

Faceless, individual, one of a crowd.
Security backdropped against white goods and electricity poles.
no-one seeks entry or madness- eccentric.
i'd start scraping if I was allowed.

Many portfolios, ratios and business class tea's.
the sports men, the trades men, the cement drenched earth.
This mould has shrouded, infested and clouded.
leaving nothing untouched like a forrest of trees.

Theoritical commercialised second class news.
the television hand trades with the industrial disasters.
the cast and crew that ingest this mouldy suburbia.
making $$$ with all the world's blues.


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The following comments are for "Mouldy Surburbia"
by The Universal mind

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In my opinion, this was a very well done piece up until about the third stanza. Then it seemed like the rythmn got off and just felt icky. All that came before it was wonderful though. I like the wording and tone you create. =D

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: October 17, 2003 )





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