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Catch A Fallen Angel
Sweeped off from heaven
Forbid from hell
Liminal as she is
Wandering

Catch A fallen angel
in desperate search of hope
from the stabbings
to the coldness
Toturous

Catch A fallen angel
who has now nothing - to loose
who sinks into silences
and fails to rise
her heart - many broken pieces
tattered

Fallen Angel
falls deeper
into the abyss
stays


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