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Wee-hours of the morning
White wisps of vanilla
Blue vast blanket and the
Caressing frozen breeze

Tender touch of teardrops
Fallen angels from above
Secret sweet smiles and the
Luring of whispers

Split seconds
Twink of an eye
A coy pink
Blossoming
Into passionate red

Night unfolds
To a silent darkness
Dreamy Tales
Of an Ingenue -
No longer





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