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My pets are neglected
Put to sleep by Cancer
And my stitches are pulled
They stay with me as a reminder
My empty head
Trying to fill itself with purgatory
While I am stuck here climbing a ladder out of Hell

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"Pretty girls make graves..." -Jack Kerouac


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The following comments are for "Hell Pet"
by MerryJayned

metaphor?
Re: Too many points...

I'm pretty sure you could say it was figurative stitches, cancer, etc. Not subject headings..

( Posted by: Lu [Member] On: November 11, 2003 )





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