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honestly I wish you would just take my heart right now
and crush it on the floor
stepping on it
leaving the blood splurting
--save me the anticipation--

slash my wrists
20 perfect horizontal lines
resembling how I will never
be perfect to you
--save me the effort--

sneak some vicodin into my food
while im not looking
make me eat every last drop
then murder me in a dark alley
--save me the pain--

drag my body into the river
send it sailing down the murky waters
slowly let it submerge in the water
make sure I never rise again
--thank you for saving me the wait--

Smiling is only a symptom of happiness and can be faked. Do not assume that everybody who smiles is happiness.


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by destroyed_art

very well written but so sad

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 15, 2003 )

thank you. yes but parts of life are very sad.


( Posted by: destroyed_art [Member] On: October 15, 2003 )

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