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I don't know how,

I don't know why,

I don't know when,

I don't know where,


But I do know that you are there

You were there all the time in the shadows

God; I know because

I can feel your presence

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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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The following comments are for "Existence"
by JEANNIE45

6.66
Its funny, because as I was reading this I happened to look over at the rating. Which happened to be 666. I wonder?

Con-quest-a-dor

( Posted by: cordle [Member] On: October 30, 2003 )

@Cordlw~
Thanks for that one! Whewwwwwwwwwww
I was checking my mail, and noticed you had made an comment on my poem. Lord knows the [666] is a Liar, and the truth is not in him. don't want that on my rtings

Thank you for the post

Blessings

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 30, 2003 )

@Cordle~
oops!!!!!! sorry about mis-spelling your name

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 30, 2003 )

is he there?
A good question and one I'm glad you have so much ease in answering. I like this poem although the first three lines hint at being overdone. The resolution however, is wonderful. =D

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: October 30, 2003 )

With Feeling
I know you're very exuberant on this whole subject, Jeannie, having read some of your other poems, but I really didn't get the feeling of excitement or any feeling at all from this poem. Perhaps something you need to look at - getting your feelings down onto paper.

( Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: October 31, 2003 )

@with feeling~
~FD~
First, let me welcome you back. missed you around here.
Thank you for the comment; Just knowing that He[God] is there, is exciting enough 4 me. FD, sometimes, I do quench the spirit, and you are right about, me getting my feelings down on paper.
thank you. well, hope to see more of you,gotta run to school 4 now.

Blessings

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 31, 2003 )

@Darkshine~
Silly me! "DS," how in the world did I passed over your comment. Thank you for your comment. the three lines that was over-done, have to work on that.

Be Blessed

{{{Jeannie}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 1, 2003 )





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