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Beneath the trees the wind is blowing
my mind set free,never knowing

I know where I came from
but"how I came to be"
will life always be a mystery?

Were their hearts filled with joy
were they overcome with love
did they know I was sent from above?

When they left me far from home
was I left close to heart
did they know this would tear me apart?

Did they hold me close,put their hands to my face
and know that this would be a day they could never replace

I long for a day when....
answers are blowing in the wind
then my life can begin.




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The following comments are for "How I Came to Be"
by suez-q

Conception
This is not a very well written poem but it is gut-wrenching and has the ring of sincerity. I've read 2 of your other poems & I like this one the best.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: October 14, 2003 )

poetry
I liked this one very much.

( Posted by: Ms.Spitfire182 [Member] On: October 14, 2003 )

meaningful
I find this a meangingful piece. I feel the sorrow that comes with it somehow..by the questions you brought up in ur own poem. Thx for ur comments in mine too!

( Posted by: ^white [Member] On: October 15, 2003 )





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