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note: a series of poems inspired by Kittens "creatures"
A companion piece to rage2fury's "The Beastie Song"



We Beasties shout, pout and grouse about
We like to howl, growl and make things fowl
Our fun begins when you nod off to sleep
In your head we crawl and dig till you weep
as we weave horrid nightmares for you to keep.

In your bed where you seem most like the dead
is where we feed and gnaw and play with your head
Oh what fun it is to hear your screams
as we vomit bile into your once sweet dreams
We beasties laughs and sings as we do our beastie things

To hell we come
In hell we shout
This is what the beasties
Are all about
Our names are lost
And we are few
We need more blood
We’ve come for YOU



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The following comments are for "The Beastie Shout"
by rcallaci

I remember!
Still sounds great Bob... I like this one too. I think you did an awesome job on this one!

( Posted by: Rage2Fury [Member] On: October 13, 2003 )

Twisted shout!
Bob, other than the fowl/foul(?) this is wonderful. It's like a Beastie stomp! I can see the Beastie cheerleaders with their pom-poms and batons cruising down the center-field all decked out in blood and guts. 9/10

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: October 13, 2003 )

dreams
I like this one, too. I know a woman who has been cursed with terrible nightmares every night of her life. I jokingly told her she should move to Hollywood where she could get rich selling her nightmares to script writers with writer's block. The beasies are alive & well. Sis boom bah - rah rah rah!

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: October 13, 2003 )





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