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rapt me of everything
even when nothing is left for you
rapt my heart and soul
and the many beautiful memories i kept so long ago

strip me naked
I have nothing to hide
strip me fast
I will show you everything you need to feast on inside

stab me again
Let me feel the pain you want me to
stab me hard
Let me feel all the strength and anger you have in you

Punish my mind
It is a toy for you to play
Punish my life
It's is a game abandoned by all who passed my way

But if you love me...
Help this handicapped angel fly
Be her pair of wings
Take her to the sky

Bring her someone to stay
Bring love back to her
Give her a reason
Keep her One More Day




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The following comments are for "My Plead"
by ^white

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that was the most feeling poem I've read in a long time

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 15, 2003 )





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