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I Die Without You
by arkaleel (Member) - published: October 10, 2003
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Category - Poetry
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Each day the torment is revived anew
From the awareness that gnaws at my heart.
For as the hours of darkness draw near to me, I draw nearer to it-
You see, at midnight I beg that this sleep be my last
So that I will not have to wake up...
Knowing that she will not be there next to me when I arise.

------
AbdelSalam Kaleel


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by arkaleel

Amazing!
Wow, such passion!! Very romantic--maybe a bit too much-- but lucky girl anyhoo!~~~

Peace

( Posted by: coralreefs [Member] On: October 13, 2003 )





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