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Waste
May 18th, 1998

Here i am
Wasting time
When there's not much left
I have to make the most of it

The countdown starts
rushing towards the end
I can't hold it back
The moment spirals closer

Time pushes me foward
Where i don't want to go
Abuses and tells me lies
Of what it plans to do

I want to spend time
With the one i care for
But time keeps me away
And i waste away to nothing

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http://www.eyescovered.com
...i close my eyes in order to see...


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by eyescovered

nice
your emotions and feeling are really present in this piece of work! i like it a lot. also like how you don't believe there is a lot of time left!... but then again who knows when time will end?... nice write!

( Posted by: drkpoet [Member] On: February 14, 2004 )

emotions
Wow, this poem is totally you, it could only be written by the person feeling that. that was an excellent display of bleeding with words. Great job, a tear hath fallen from mine eye......I hope that somehow you figure out how to manage time, so that it doesn't manage you. Oh but how time flies, and you never know just when it all will end. Then when it gets nearer to the end, you wonder....Did I even begin. I always feel as though I am spinning my wheels and wasting time. Especially when I am away from my lover.

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: February 15, 2004 )





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