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Imagine You
April 30th, 2000

Remembering the way
The way you were
Before i knew you
Now i hear your name

Nightmares that you wanted
Can you be for real now?

I just feel thin air when
I touch your face
You're only a picture in my mind
You're in my head

Soon you'll fade away
Were you ever here?
But i'd never search
Cause i know i'd find you


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http://www.eyescovered.com
...i close my eyes in order to see...


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by eyescovered

great
Brilliant as always, eyescovered! I just loved it, from the beginning to the end

( Posted by: Dew Of Blood [Member] On: December 22, 2003 )





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