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Jag förstår.
Jag hörs ingen att bör
förklarar mig
värför.

Men jag minnas mer
än förklarningarna.
Jag minnas leenderna
men också andra.

Du behöv inte
Att förklarar mig.
Däreför att jag förstå.
Men jag kan inte förlåta dig.



(I understand./ I have heard nothing that should/ explain to me/ why./ But I remember more/ than explanations./ I remember the smiles/ but also the rest./ You do not need/ to explain to me./ because I understand./ But I cannot forgive you.) [NB: in Swedish]



------
-Lu


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The following comments are for "Jag Förstår"
by Lu

language!
Thanks for the translation, Lu. =D I enjoyed this poem...very to the point and minimalistic.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: October 8, 2003 )

heh
Minamlist, indeed. And nicely done. However, if you like minimalist poetic writing, do check out some Burzum lyrics. One of my Burzum reviews are posted on this site.

( Posted by: gaschamberblues [Member] On: October 8, 2003 )





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