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dropped unawares
it quietly broke
a faint echo


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The following comments are for "Trust"
by Ae

haiku
I've only been on this site for about 2 weeks but this is one of the few so-called haiku that's really a haiku.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: October 7, 2003 )

nice poem
just letting you know I read it.

( Posted by: Seanspacey [Member] On: October 7, 2003 )

Sounds like a sound
and it's good. Sometimes it's easier to say a little, and communicate much more.

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: July 15, 2004 )





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