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Youíre Not God
Verse 1

Raise you head

Above the rest

Your will is law

All will attest

If I rise against you

I do it alone

Watch out for me

Chorus

Iím the outcast with nothing to lose

The kid who could care less if you disapprove

I donít know who you think you are

Youíre not God

Youíre not God

Verse 1

I treat you with love and you spit in my face

God forbid that I think for myself

Or travel out of pace

With you personal view of reality

Watch out for me

(Chorus)

Bridge

I hope you change

Iíll still treat you with respect

That you donít deserve

Cause Jesus gave us love

Weíd never earn

(Chorus)


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Now, what was I saying...


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The following comments are for "You're Not God"
by Brenron

nice
I think this is a nice little song, and while it certainly doesn't hold up much weight as a poem it could meet much sucess with some drums and a guitar put to it. I don't know about anyone else, but I like it for what it is. =D

Why did you double space on this poem? That's very annoying to me. Just a personal thought.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: October 10, 2003 )

well...
I double spaced because of another site I put the song on, if I don't double space, it'll come out messed up.

( Posted by: Brenron [Member] On: October 11, 2003 )

You're Not God
Reading this I was able to hear the guitars and drums. This poem is a great throwdown to all those opposing forces we meet each day that usually turn out to be nothing more than guys and girls just like us with more money, better suits and a ridiculously heightened sense of entitlement. You go,Brenron! Excuse me, but I,ve got a sudden urge to listen to my old Stooges records (this is a good thing).

( Posted by: tim55b [Member] On: October 18, 2003 )





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