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right now you don't want to battle rap
you're constipated, you have to battle crap
I'm winning races and
you're still running laps
I am self directed
while you are still using maps
In living color
you get no snaps
you're already sleeping
you can't take a nap
a mind is useless
if your shooting smack
and only your bra
is coming strapped
you're words are fiction
yeah, that's a fact
I'm drinking water
while you are drinkin fraps
you preach real truth
but that's a trap
nothing is true for all
and that is that
and
gee a tea
sounds good to me
is an anacronym for gat
which is all you pack

sorry, sometimes it just
overtakes all of us
you know
madness
easily mistaken
for dorkdumb...


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don't worry, it's just God speaking...


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The following comments are for "battle rap"
by 42 suicidal mules

w00t
not a bad rap, got be stuck in trap
sa, do you really rap, or just write this cool crap?

Nice, heh.

( Posted by: gaschamberblues [Member] On: October 7, 2003 )

rap
"is coming strapped" - I don't get what that's supposed to mean. Also, "you get no snaps" - football reference? Wha? Also, don't you mean acronym? Overall, not too bad.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: October 7, 2003 )





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