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I am the dark light
I am that which consumes
I am the freedom
left burning on fumes

I am the wondering
I am that lingering ache
I am the lost
feeding in the wake

I am the lonly
I am that which aspires
I am the hope
left burning in the fires

I am the one
I am that which exists
I am the feeling
bubbling from the mist

I am.

Chrispian H. Burks
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by Chrispian

very good

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 12, 2003 )

I looked back and....
I looked back and found you; I found you in a fresh sight that is aging day by day with newer series of images and imageries, like this one of yours.
We gather valour to get back from today's grave of the hideous dream to the lonely whispers of immortal expressions that say in a loud whisper "I am".
Have great regards,

( Posted by: Myth [Member] On: February 27, 2005 )

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