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Drive
March 10th, 2003 - March 11th, 2003

Got a full tank of gas
But no where to go
Got nothing to lose
But something to gain

There's so much time can take away
But there's more that it leaves behind
People go in and out of your life
But memories are forever inside

I could drive around forever
But i'd still end up back home
Making circles makes me dizzy
Next time, you're coming with me

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http://www.eyescovered.com
...i close my eyes in order to see...


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The following comments are for "Drive"
by eyescovered

poetry
I think this is great

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 15, 2003 )

unoriginal
If you really feel the urge to write, I think you ought to practice digging deeper. This poem says nothing new and is bland and boring to read. Keep trying :)

( Posted by: desconocida [Member] On: October 16, 2003 )





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