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The truth would have a hard time finding you
Through your cloak of lies and deceit.
If you tried to make amends with the hurt
You would be turned away with glee.
There is nothing you can do that repairs
What you have done to so many over time.
Standing on both sides as you have done
Makes you less understanding.
Using your weaknesses against those who love
Is cowardly on your part and destructive on theirs.
You have no feelings, no care for the damaged
As has been proven with your reckless actions.
You demand devotion and solitary attentions
And in return you wander and waver from soul to soul.
If you learn one thing throughout your despicable life
Hope it is that you are not what you claim to be.


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The following comments are for "Black"
by Xlnt_1

Bravo!
I wouldn't want to be on the recieving end of this! Bravo to you for pouring out your soul in delightful eloquence. And jeers to the bastard who inspired it!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: October 3, 2003 )





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