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If there is nothing for me
After this is done
I want none of it.
There must be a role
For me to play
Even if it is this.
The feeling of failure
Is ever present
And suffocating.
I want to be something
That is wrong
But at least be.
The control is mine alone
And the first step
Must be taken.
The others do not know
What it is like
To be me.

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The following comments are for "Struggle"
by Xlnt_1

Feel the angst baby! Existential suffering! The pangs of nihilism! Beautiful!

I especially liked the line, "The control is mine alone". Have you read Jean-Paul Sartre?

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: October 3, 2003 )

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