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Note: This is "In Loving Memory Of My Mother"
Mrs.Eloise Baldwin
October 7,1923 to April 27,2001

~Happy Birthday Mother~

Our Gift

A gift is always received
a few felt like they was deceived
God lent you "Mom" to us
and now we know in our heart
that the gift God gave to us
has now been taken away

God is quite remarkable
He knows when our time is up
and at times, He excels Himself
He gave us a Mother who
gave us unconditional love

So strong, yet still
quick to forgive
always grateful
for another being

We all miss you very,very much
we was certainly blessed
by your presence
we was all moved by
your tender touch
Mother; you would always
bring a delightful smile

Now times have flown
and we have grown
for faith, we thank
you Mother

Your grandchildren and
great grandchildren
miss you as well as we do
there is a little of you
in them as they grow older

Your one request to God; was for
us to keep the light burning
from inside all of us and your
grandchildren and greatgrands
and for GOD to en-camp His
Holy Angels all around us

As your spirit continue to flow
we will never let you go
until we meet again
we will meet you in the air
to meet Jesus face to face

We love you, from all of your [11] children
and from all of your grandchildren,and greatgrands,and family members

Jackie,Billy,Joseph,and Milton

"Happy Birthday Mom"

"To God Be The Glory"

"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~

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The following comments are for "Our Gift"

That was beautiful.
John 5:28,29 is comforting.

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 14, 2003 )


Thank you sweet child for your comment. I askED "GOD" to meet your every need and to take you higher. My "Mother" was very special to all of us. and again {Suez}, thank you for sending along with your comment, {JOHN 5:28,29} IT WAS VERY COMFORTING. GOD BLESS YOU AND FAMILY



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 16, 2003 )

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