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~~*Mom*~~
I can still see the smile on your face
a piece of your life was gone without a sound
but you was waiting, just waiting for your call
when it came, your prayer's got answered
leaving pain in my heart
yet having joy at the same time

~~*Mom*~~
People say I have your smile
you have only been gone a little while
I miss brushing your beautiful
long grey and black hair
of Indian descendents
I can still smell the fragrance
of your hair

~~*Mom*~~
I will forever love you
until we meet again
on that beautiful shore
I ask God to let me hear your voice
longing to hear your tone
just to see your smile

~~*Mom*~~
One of these days, I shall
see your smile again
to feel your touch
and to see you face to face

~~*Mom*~~
I love you



copyright(c) may 2001



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"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~






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The following comments are for "~~*~*My Mother Smile*~*~~"
by JEANNIE45

Mom
Touching poem... Very touching. Personal experiences? I think I will write a poem for my mother. I have thought of it before in the past, but other ideas came to me first. Anyway I love the comforting feeling this peice gives out. one spelling mistake unless you did it on purpose was ("was") and I think it should be were. *smiles*

( Posted by: Rage2Fury [Member] On: October 9, 2003 )

Rage2fury/My Mother's smile
~~Rage2fury~~

Thank you so much. This meant a lot to me. I asked God in my prayers to meet your every need, and give you the desires of your heart, and take you higher, and higher. trust me, God will answer my prayers, He has never failed me yet.

Rage; I would love to comment on your last poem. but considering the topic, I rather not, you can understand my position I hope. But never-the-less, by the hits that you are recieving, you are doing great. but I do enjoy reading your other work. Keep em' co'min

God bless you and family

Blessings

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: October 13, 2003 )





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