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I was listening to you
But I was digging my nails in my skin
I was trying to hear words
But I could only hear scrapes
I could hear nothing
I could hear your voice


I felt my nails on my bones
I felt my life on my shoulder
I felt you staring
I felt you caring

You words struck me hard
But I didn't notice
I was too busy living
Breathing

I was too busy biting my veins

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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