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there is no getting over
there is no inner healing
and if you keep on waiting
you're bound to go insane
there's only one sure way
to cure what you are feeling
take it out on someone else
the transference of pain



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The following comments are for "therapy"
by DL Scott

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I don't really quite understand the poem. It has no rythming or any other qualifications of what is considered a poem. I think that with reworking this peice could be turned into not just a poem, but a good one. It is also very short which is another part that should be reworked. I also think that a poem should say something positive and almost moralistic than not. When you said "take it out on someone else," that line bothered me. I personally didn't like it, but it could be reworked. I'd suggest playing around with it. I would have to give this a 1/10.

( Posted by: zacharu [Member] On: June 19, 2004 )





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