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truth is mud evaporated
and I love taxedermy
and backpacks full of bumper chrome
and lapis lazuli
much the same way I used to love you
not the generic you
like I am talking to somebody else
but you, the unfortunate reader
who wishes they were me
see, I know what you think
and I know, it's hard not to love me
but please, refrain from the applause
I have been to places
unseen by most and felt clean
in shirts that I found
it's not nice but we survive
or we don't, that's that
I used to want you to like me
maybe even needed it
but now
I can type this
and use words like osudpfihasgh
bceasue I dnot rlealy wnedor
anymore

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don't worry, it's just God speaking...


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The following comments are for "this is my life"
by 42 suicidal mules

sure, yeah!
i'm feeling really kind of... liberated... or something, reading your stuff. it just sings some strange freedom song. cuts through to the mess at the core.

truth really is mud evaporated, isn't it?

and I love taxedermy
and backpacks full of bumper chrome
and lapis lazuli

this rocks my image-hungry mind, but taxIdermy is spelled wrong...

( Posted by: ark [Member] On: March 16, 2004 )





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