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Tranquil, I've thought out my last of hopes.
Blankful, I've spewed out my last of dopes.
Sceenplays, and all I've written my heart into,
Naysays, and all I've believed in you.

CHOURUS
Trust not be me, I'm in despise,
all I've written, boil in my lies.
Am I lost? Forgotten in my dreams,
and all I am, torn at the seams.

Hated, brought into my life,
jaded, cut by his stained knife.
Tortured, by the words all the same,
I'm beating, the hard lasting game.

CHOURUS
I will win, don't doubt me,
I am it, be all I can be.
You will see, the glory,
be painted on me, painted on me.


BRIDGE
You will not see me lose,
you will not, be what I choose,
The greatest fear brought by you,
I refuse to let you see me lose!

REPEAT FIRST CHOURUS

------
krazi-Renee


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The following comments are for "What You Live"
by KRAZIRENEE

What you live
I didn't care for these lyrics at all but they have a good rhythm.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: September 28, 2003 )





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