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Waiting for the next best thing
the next best thing to that old thing
who knows how long i've been waiting
waiting for the next best thing...

Waiting for something better
something better than a rejection letter
if she sends one more...no God don't let her!
she's only waiting for someone better

Itching for something pure
something pure and by far much newer
newer than what's growing fewer
itching for something pure...

Waiting for the man up stairs
to finally catch me unawares
it's obvious she has no cares
no cares unlike the man upstairs...


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The following comments are for "Waiting for the next best thing"
by The Universal mind

Sanity
The inevitable has come to pass - the poet has lost their sanity!

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: October 18, 2003 )

gosh darn awsome
i found this poem pretty gosh darn awsome! i really liked it! wasn't too short or long and it got your point across, the way you form your words with somewhat of a little repetition really worked! it was catchy, i like it!

( Posted by: englishgal16 [Member] On: March 16, 2005 )





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