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In darkness we're created,
to live under the light,
it's no wonder then,
that after all,
some revelations,
give us fright!!!!

so sad for mommies little troll,
who physically or not,
makes us glad for who we are,
and what at home we've got.

some mothers try thier hardest,
to bring up johnny right,
but others don't have time for him,
after closing time every night,

some have the patience of a saint,
when to child a reason they tell,
others say through hagovers,
johnny go to _____!!

oh it's not a commentary
on who's right and who is wrong,
you'll find out that when they're sixteen,
and beligerent...and strong...

maybe your car will dissapear,
and tv. set will too,
and johnny will just smile...
or coldly look at you,

so three cheers for the local bar,
and how much fun it is,
we'll look in on johnny later...
that's where the cop car is?






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The following comments are for "nature vs nuture or just joshing ya"
by wally 5

Social commentary
you have a strong message in between some typos! This is a powerful piece of writing - very in your face style and I like it.

( Posted by: witchy woman [Member] On: September 27, 2003 )

laugh-riot
I laughed so hard while reading this poem so bravo to you! Just fix up the tpyos and it will be a classic.

And why leave out "hell"? Put it in man!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: September 27, 2003 )

nature/nurture
Yes, put in "hell," but they'd probably say something more like "get lost."

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: September 28, 2003 )





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