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Nobody hears a word I say,
It was never as bad as this in my day
Everyone believed what I said to be true
Now the ones admitted to heaven are few
Maybe I should take another look
At the words which are written within the great book
What was the event that got their attention?
I must try another for which they have no prevention
Great balls of fire? No maybe a flood!
Have all of their land covered with blood!
I think that might seem
A little extreme
The problem with people today is this;
They have no fear; ignorance is bliss!
So what can I do to make them really scared?
So that they turn back to me, and make them think I cared...
I kill all their loved ones to no avail
Their will to defy me continues to prevail
It seems there is nothing I can do anymore
There are few worth wasting my effort for
Should I wait for them to take over the world?
Or should I just end it now...
Hey, I never thought of that!

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The following comments are for "A message from God"
by man eating maniac

even though i found the flow of this a little choppy, i felt the message come through loud and clear. an interesting perspective on what sort of world we live in.

( Posted by: xlnt_1 [Member] On: September 25, 2003 )

"Poetic Thoughts"
I truly like the "Abstraction" you have here



( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 25, 2003 )

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