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St. Valentines day
It's the loneliest of days
I'd like the world to go away
So I can sit

Yes so I can sit
in the darkest of corners
and whistle
the merries of tunes

Everyone is so bright and gay
And they don't care that I'm not
As if they want to rub it in
On this beloved Valentine's day

-kjredmond



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by Dark Shadow

St. Valentine's Day
You say what you mean to which is good. The poem can be better. You got this far, keep trying!

( Posted by: Dfortyseven [Member] On: May 3, 2005 )





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