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One More

One more drop, within a rain-cloud
One more face, part of a crowd
One more day, within a century
One more time


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When the winds of the west blow, it is called Farror, for he is the god of all wind.


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by Farror

short but nice
makes you think...like poetry should.

( Posted by: wally 5 [Member] On: September 23, 2003 )

hmm..
I like it it makes you think and use your noggin which like walley 5 said makes you think like poetry should.

( Posted by: punker chick [Member] On: February 17, 2004 )





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