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I think i'm not talking
but I don't know why for
It seems everyone i speaks to
thinks that i'm a bore
I tried to converse with my neighbour
but she quickly covered her ear
it was a good indication
that she didnt want to hear
I went to my lectures
and a question I had to ask
but the teacher didnt even stir
and said i'd fail before i'd pass
So now im not talking
my tongue shall grow stale
its time will be taken up smoking pipes
and tasting lots of ale.



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The following comments are for "I think I'm not talking"
by The Universal mind

A little awkward
i liked this until the last two lines. and then it ground to a halt... maybe it's just the wording, but it doesn't quite tie up the poem like it could be. otherwise, good effort.

( Posted by: Xlnt_1 [Member] On: September 19, 2003 )





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