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To say what's honestly on my mind
I'd have to clear out the cobwebs
Of indecision and insecurity
Beyond what you've already seen.
The fear that you would run away
Or that I would hurt you more than before
Is the most prominent thought I have
Keeping me and my feelings to myself.
Is it worth it not letting it out
Before it erupts at the worst time
Propelling us towards oblivion
Perhaps bringing us closer together?


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The following comments are for "The thin line"
by Xlnt_1

another homer
Another great poem, xlnt1. You always manage to come up with honest, heartfelt, evocative work. Thanks again.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: September 19, 2003 )

FUn
I enjoyed this muchly.

( Posted by: Bigyellowmonkey [Member] On: September 19, 2003 )





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