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'Twas sucked into thy Black Hole,
It devoured all,
Engulfed his heart and soul.

"Thou art not a god", said thy mind,
Fore' I am a demon from hell,
Mighty hunter; a fellow Nimrod.

"Not a god indeed", said he,
Taking life from all alive,
That of old; those soon to be,
They'd sacrifice and not surive.

Left; now right to darkness,
A Black Abyss of Hell,
Thy mind is full of starkness,
Through me it shows and tells.

"Now is the end", said thy mind.
"No time to lend?", asked he.

Together they watched as the sun lost its way,
As the sea turned red and the sky turned gray.

In the sixth row, sixth isle, the sixth day of death and pain,
He watched as death came closer,
Thy mind began its reign.


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~Steven-Denmark~
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"Remember Forever And Never Forget"


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The following comments are for "Hell Bound Thoughts"
by Rage2Fury

Uh . . .
. . . no. Did you ever see "Goth Talk" on SNL? That's what this poem brought to mind. Sorry.

Word.

( Posted by: Boy Howdy [Member] On: September 21, 2003 )

Huh?
What do you mean sorry?

( Posted by: Rage2Fury [Member] On: September 21, 2003 )

No!
I have never seen Goth Talk on SNL. Never even heard of it. Just my thoughts though... "Sorry" if you did not like what I wrote!

( Posted by: Rage2Fury [Member] On: September 21, 2003 )





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