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The Angel arises
From future demises
If all were like her
We wouldn't need war

Yet all are asleep
The strong and the meek
How can they arise
When they live in their lies?

The Angel arises
From present demises
If all could see her
We wouldn't want war

The Angel arose
To strike away foes
When all can see her
There won't be a war


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