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When the sun flashes though the trees
Theres an eerie sight
They will be brought to there knees
By this spiritual light
Its like heaven shining through
Touching the ground with a kiss
Testing if your faith is true
Then your soul will be in bliss.

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The following comments are for "Smokey Light"
by Colwyn

good work
This is a really good piece you have here. I like its eerie atmosphere, so full of light... You've expressed beauty in so little words, and that's one of the things I appreciate the most. If it weren't for that "there" typo, I'd have given you a full ten. Congratulations, anyway

( Posted by: Dew Of Blood [Member] On: September 22, 2003 )

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