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--the dam breaks.
Judiciousness lost
in a mad rush
of dark waters.

They flow to oceans
where depths unknown
invite me
to sink and rest
submerged
finally
in the comfort
of complete
and utter oppression,
in darkness and cold.

Now still
my skeleton lay,
the playpen
of bottom dwelling
creatures
that have never seen
light of day.


------
"I must create my own system, or be enslaved by another man's"-William Blake



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