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I often wonder
What it would be like
To not be me.
To be that person
Across the room
Or down the street.
To deal with their life
And their problems
Even if they are the same as mine.

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by Xlnt_1

me too
I often wonder the same thing, and was touched by the the reflective yearning in this piece. It evokes a mood simply and effectively -- without pretension or strained imagery or obscure words. An autumn poem.

Good work!

( Posted by: Boy Howdy [Member] On: September 13, 2003 )

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